The Australian Writers’ Centre runs a monthly #FuriousFiction short story competition. I submitted my first entry to #FuriousFiction on the first weekend of our COVID-19 lockdown and ever since have taken up the monthly challenge. So I was interested to see a bonus 23-word fiction story challenge.
I’ve dabbled with microfiction, also known as flash fiction, some of which I’ve published on Tall And True. And I submitted an entry to an earlier 29-word challenge run by the Writers’ Centre (also on Tall And True), We Need to Talk. And I’ve reviewed a collection of microfiction for Writing NSW, Loopholes by Susan McCreery.
Now was my chance to flex my imagination and fingers with a 23-word short story. As with #FuriousFiction, the rules were simple:
- The story must not contain more than 23 words (hyphenated words count as one word)
- And it must be inspired by the image of the elephant in the room (on the Writers’ Centre website).
But I decided to make it a little more *challenging* for myself, by setting a goal of submitting six entries, that’s 2*3 23-word stories. And here they are, in no particular order:
The Elephant in the Room
They greeted each morning with silence and retreated to opposite ends of the house. Neither wanted to face the elephant in the room.
Tembo’s Trumpeted Warning
Tembo had expressed misgivings about the zoo’s new elephant enclosure. But no one heeded his trumpeted warnings on the unsuitability of flatpack furniture.
Horton Hears More Whos
Horton heard Whos hollering in the house. “HELP!” The pool was cool in the Jungle of Nool. Still, Horton sighed and charged inside.
Old Circus Tricks
Jumbo didn’t miss the circus. Yet every so often, he liked to practise his old circus-ring tricks, like balancing on a chair. Oops!
No Pets on the Sofa
Elle’s owners had hired a professional trainer to help with her separation anxiety. And Elle knew she wasn’t allowed on the sofa. But …
Perhaps, refected little Tommy, I should have checked with mum before bringing home the stray elephant I found in the street after school?
Submissions for the Writers’ Centre’s 23-word story challenge ran for four days and closed at midnight on Monday 27 July 2020 (AEST). I submitted my six stories and crossed my fingers I’d have the same success as I did with my 29-word “We never talk” microfiction piece in 2019.
Wish me luck! I’ll update this post when the judges publish their favourite stories on the Writers’ Centre blog.
Update: Selected 23-Word Stories
On 30 July, the Australian Writers’ Centre published a selection from the almost 2000 submissions of 23-word stories on their blog — and mine wasn’t among them! That said, this was my favourite “elephant in the room” story, by Mary Claffey:
In his deepest being, Johan yearned for the wide, undulating savannah. “I’m tired of working from home,” he thought, wistfully.
© 2020 Robert Fairhead
N.B. You might like to read this blog post about an earlier version of the We Need to Talk microfiction piece I wrote to celebrate 280-character tweets on Twitter.
Note: This post originally appeared on the Tall And True writers’ website blog.
Welcome to the blog posts and selected writing of a middle-aged dad and dog owner. Robert Fairhead is writer and editor at Tall And True, an online showcase and forum for writers, readers and publishers. His book reviews and other writing have appeared in various print and online media. And he has published two collections of short stories, Both Sides of the Story (2020) and Twelve Furious Months (2021).