Episode 93 (27 May 2024): Teresa’s first thing in the morning text message was a punch in the guts. “Sorry, Colin. I love you, but we’re on different journeys. Let’s stay friends.” I blinked twice to clear my eyes and was about to respond, “Are you serious?” but threw the phone against the bedroom wall instead.

I wrote Different Journeys in January 2024 for the Not Quite Write Prize, run by the Not Quite Write Podcast. Their brief was:

  • Your story must feature the word PUNCH. The word must be used in full with no spaces or interrupting punctuation. However, it may be included within a longer word provided the original spelling is retained, for example, punching or punchline.
  • It must feature the action of “spilling something”. You don’t need to use this exact wording, and you can feature the action prominently or simply as an aside. The action may occur before the beginning of your story or after it ends, as long as it’s referenced somewhere within your story.
  • And it must break the rule “avoid clichés”. You can interpret this anti-prompt in whatever creative way you see fit, but your goal should remain to tell the best story possible.

Writers had 60 hours from midday Friday to midnight Sunday on the weekend of the competition to write and submit their 500-word flash fiction stories.

Two Clichés

Thanks to the Australian Writers’ Centre’s Furious Fiction challenges, I’m used to writing short stories to tight deadlines, so I had faith in my creativity and process.

But as I admitted in the insight for the last story I wrote for the Not Quite Write Prize in July 2023, In Her HeadEpisode 84 of Tall And True Short Reads, I struggle with anti-prompts!

I settled on two clichés:

  1. A punch in the guts.
  2. Life is full of compromises.

Interestingly, as podcast hosts Amanda and Ed revealed, there were many “punches in the guts” in the stories submitted. Even the winning entry, It Never Rains But It Pours by Athena Law (on Twitter), which “famously” featured the one-word opening sentence, “Moist.”, included the line:

The old ceiling fan punches through the humidity, causing darling goosebumps across your golden, youthful skin.

No Punch in the Guts

While my story wasn’t short or longlisted for the Not Quite Write Prize, it didn’t feel like a punch in the guts because I enjoyed writing Different Journeys and proving, once again, that my process works!

I hope you enjoy this story as much as I enjoyed writing it. You can read Different Journeys and my selected short stories, blog posts, and other writings on Tall And True.

You can also buy my short story collections, including the latest Tall And True Microfiction anthology, from the Amazon KindleApple Books, and Kobo online bookstores.

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© 2024 Robert Fairhead

N.B. You might like to read this blog post introducing Tall And True Short Reads – Season Four.

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Welcome to the blog posts and selected writing of Robert Fairhead. A writer and editor at the Tall And True writers' website, Robert also writes and narrates episodes for the Tall And True Short Reads podcast. In addition, his book reviews and other writing have appeared in print and online media, and he's published several collections of short stories. Please see Robert's profile for further details.

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