A faded photo, a Mona Lisa smile — a penny for your thoughts, Dad?

An old colour photo of my dad from the 1970s inspired this one-liner piece of microfiction. He had a faraway look in his eyes and a Mona Lisa smile on his much younger face.

As art lovers have done for centuries with Leonardo da Vinci’s painting of the Mona Lisa, I wondered what my dad was thinking in the photo?

Why was he smiling so subtly? Was it a smile?

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Sobering Selfie

I would’ve liked to use the faded photo of my dad in the microfiction – after all, it was his Mona Lisa smile that inspired the writing – but for the sake of his privacy, I used a doctored selfie instead.

It was sobering staring at the two photos to realise my dad was younger in the 1970s than I am now!

In microfiction or flash fiction, the writer offers a sentence or two, maybe a paragraph, and leaves the before and after narrative, motivation and denouement to the reader’s imagination.

So microfiction is like an instant caught in time. Or like a faded photo.

© 2018 Robert Fairhead

N.B. This microfiction piece is also shared on the Tall And True writers’ website. And you might like to read another blog post about microfiction: We Need To Talk (November 2017).

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About RobertFairhead.com

About RobertFairhead.com

Welcome to the blog posts and selected writing of a middle-aged dad and dog owner. Among other things, Robert is an editor and writer at Tall And True, an online showcase and forum for writers, readers and publishers. In 2020, he published his first collection of short stories, Both Sides of the Story (available from Amazon).

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